Hi Sandra I like how you put my name in one of your sentences. I love how you made a border in your work. It reminded me of when I did my never poem. Maybe next time you could try to make sentences longer.
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Hi Sandra I like how you put my name in one of your sentences. I love how you made a border in your work. It reminded me of when I did my never poem. Maybe next time you could try to make sentences longer.
ReplyDeleteok I will try next time when I do any kind of writing.
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