Crunchy gold bread
I hear bubbles,
bubbling and popping,
underneath the teacher's fingers.
It makes me wonder how will it feel when I get my turn to feel the bread.
Sticky and squishy,
like Kinetic Sand,
makes me so tempted to feel the white bread.
I eat the bread, wow! That tastes so different to what I have imagined.
I love how you described the things you could hear and feel around you. I like how you compared the feeling of it to Kinetic Sand, it lets me have a rough feeling of what it felt like. Also, what did it taste like? Did it taste nice?
ReplyDeleteThe bread tasted a bit doughy But still the bread tasted yummy.
ReplyDeleteThank-you for the comment and I love it when people ask me questions.
Thank-you